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patric design
Bipolar (III) Inmate

From: 290 km/h, fast lane, Autobahn, Germany
Insane since: Feb 2001

IP logged posted posted 03-13-2002 18:24 Edit Quote

Cheers all!
I'd like syour opinion in this sketch. What do you think about the "house" layout? Its for that real estate site again... for those of you who remember!
http://clients.patricdesign.com/cc/testing2.gif

Looking forward to all suggestions and comments!

<´¯`·.¸ Patric ¸.·´¯`>

Emperor
Maniac (V) Mad Scientist with Finglongers

From: Cell 53, East Wing
Insane since: Jul 2001

IP logged posted posted 03-13-2002 20:30 Edit Quote

pd: I remember well and I like the simple look and feel of this but pos. not the tuquiosey (sp?) colour. However, it does contrast well with the white and makes the house shape stand out. Looks good.

Emps

Lurch
Paranoid (IV) Inmate

From: Behind the Wheel
Insane since: Jan 2002

IP logged posted posted 03-13-2002 20:59 Edit Quote

looks like an arrow to me

--Lurch--

marf
Bipolar (III) Inmate

From: Canada
Insane since: Oct 2001

IP logged posted posted 03-13-2002 21:00 Edit Quote

Nice simplistic Design, I would give more input but I don't speak the language

patric design
Bipolar (III) Inmate

From: 290 km/h, fast lane, Autobahn, Germany
Insane since: Feb 2001

IP logged posted posted 03-13-2002 22:11 Edit Quote

Thanx! To make things clearer I've made it look more like a house. This will probably give you a better idea of the intention with the "windows" in the house.
http://clients.patricdesign.com/cc/testing3.gif

I changed the color slightly as well but i can't do much because cyan is the corp. identity color of them.
Changed the language to english as welll! :-)

<´¯`·.¸ Patric ¸.·´¯`>

Emperor
Maniac (V) Mad Scientist with Finglongers

From: Cell 53, East Wing
Insane since: Jul 2001

IP logged posted posted 03-14-2002 00:51 Edit Quote

pd: Nice touches - I like them. Now go and transform it into HTML and we can see how it works!! Sorry I'm never comfortable giving reviews on just images.

Emps

BeeKay
Bipolar (III) Inmate

From: North Carolina mountains
Insane since: Dec 2000

IP logged posted posted 03-14-2002 05:52 Edit Quote

Even in the latest version, it still looks like an arrow to me. Mainly cause the 'body' of the house is too high. I recommend shortening the body of the house and/or adding a side porch or garage or something to remove the arrow-look.

Veneficuz
Paranoid (IV) Inmate

From: A graveyard of dreams
Insane since: Mar 2001

IP logged posted posted 03-14-2002 15:45 Edit Quote

I agree with BeeKay; it looks like an arrow, but that might change when you transform into HTML.


-= Veneficuz =-

"Faith: not wanting to know what is true. "- Friedrich Nietzsche

benev
Bipolar (III) Inmate

From: New Jersey, USA
Insane since: Jan 2002

IP logged posted posted 03-15-2002 03:21 Edit Quote

It's a bit too plain in my oppinion. I would emphasize more on the inverting text, try experimenting.

[This message has been edited by benev (edited 03-15-2002).]



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