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trust_no1
Bipolar (III) Inmate

From: outer space
Insane since: May 2002

posted posted 06-27-2002 04:42

This is my first website and I dont have very many super special programs, go ahead give me comments or critisism. I dont care i just want input.
www.gamequarter.com

Check it out!!!!!!

<img src=My Documents/image.bmp.u.Suck.img>

Jestah
Maniac (V) Mad Scientist

From: Long Island, NY
Insane since: Jun 2000

posted posted 06-27-2002 04:51

Moving this to the Site Reviews forum

-Jestah
Cell 277

counterfeitbacon
Paranoid (IV) Inmate

From: Vancouver, WA
Insane since: Apr 2002

posted posted 06-27-2002 05:23

It sucks...Period!

You didn't make it either...

[This message has been edited by counterfeitbacon (edited 06-27-2002).]

tomeaglescz
Paranoid (IV) Inmate

From: Czech Republic via Bristol UK
Insane since: Feb 2002

posted posted 06-27-2002 10:04

Ouch! who did make it CFB?

Tool School strikes again

WebShaman
Maniac (V) Mad Scientist

From: Happy Hunting Grounds...
Insane since: Mar 2001

posted posted 06-27-2002 13:22

Ok, CFB...you say

quote:
It sucks...Period!

You didn't make it either...



Either you

A) Offer proof of this
or
B) Stop accussing him

And posting 'It sucks!' without reasons for why it sucks is hardly productive...and is actually antagonistic. If you don't like it, then say why, and point out what could be done better.

Got it? Good.

So on with the review...

[This message has been edited by WebShaman (edited 06-27-2002).]

CPrompt
Maniac (V) Inmate

From: there...no..there.....
Insane since: May 2001

posted posted 06-27-2002 14:12

Well, just leaving what CFB says, I will proceed:

The logo has a black background and with the scanlines in the background, it looks really weird.

The menu bullets could be spaced away from the link a little more. Right now they are right up against each other. Why not go ahead and make the navigation all graphics instead of a small bullet and then text?

The sections don't really sepearte well. By that I mean that there is nothing that distinguishes the different sections: "NAV" "NEWS" "BATTLE.NET NEWS". Everything just kind of runs together on my 800x600.

The color of the a:visited doesn't really work. As well as the color of the "Email this" "Print This" etc. . .

For the Navigation, when you don't have a page for them to go to, put in "#" instead of the page that is supposted to be there. Saves some time on having to hit the Back button.

Change the font on the text and link. Right now you are letting it default which is a BAD thing! You are using the font tag which is also really bad. Don't do that. You have some style sheets stuff for the scroll bar so why not put your font specs in there as well?

It may do some good to work on the logo some more. I don't really think that it works for a game site. Might want to put some type of "slogan" in there just saying really breifly what the site is. Like: "Game Quarter" "A quarterly newsletter about gamming". That's kind of silly sounding but I hope you get what I'm saying.


Later,
C:\


~Binary is best~

Trigger
Paranoid (IV) Inmate

From:
Insane since: Jun 2002

posted posted 06-27-2002 19:32

ehum i think CPrompt said it all
but just out of curisoty why do you have

code:
<style type="text/css">
<style type="text/css">{ }
BODY {
scrollbar-3d-light-color:#687390;
scrollbar-arrow-color:#6F87C3;
scrollbar-base-color:#6F87C3;
scrollbar-dark-shadow-color:#3B4152;
scrollbar-face-color:#59637C;
scrollbar-highlight-color:#3B4152;
scrollbar-shadow-color:#6F87C3; }
a:link {color: #DBD5FF; font-size: -1; text-decoration: none}
a:hover {color: #00FFFF; font-size: -1; text-decoration: none}
a:active {color: #DBD5FF; font-size: -1; text-decoration: none}
a:visited {color: #0000; font-size: -1; text-decoration: none}
//-->
</style>
</style>



whats with the double opening tag's and closeing tag's
and the { } at the end of your second style tag
does this give some desired effect i dont know about?

counterfeitbacon
Paranoid (IV) Inmate

From: Vancouver, WA
Insane since: Apr 2002

posted posted 06-28-2002 20:57

Ok...Sorry. It just didn't look like your work.And Josh and Nick didn't think that either. Sorry though, it probably is.
But knowing your previous antics I was wary
WTF is tool school?

sorry.

[This message has been edited by counterfeitbacon (edited 06-28-2002).]

trust_no1
Bipolar (III) Inmate

From: outer space
Insane since: May 2002

posted posted 06-29-2002 00:56

a

[This message has been edited by trust_no1 (edited 06-29-2002).]

trust_no1
Bipolar (III) Inmate

From: outer space
Insane since: May 2002

posted posted 06-29-2002 01:05

s

[This message has been edited by trust_no1 (edited 06-29-2002).]

synax
Maniac (V) Inmate

From: Cell 666
Insane since: Mar 2002

posted posted 06-29-2002 01:08

Gah... CFB, can you and your friends do your squabbling elsewhere?

As far as the site is concerned, it needs alot of work. Right now it's very plain and unorganised, and I'm pretty sure I saw those little icons at the bottom of the page somewhere's else, so I would lose them before you get in trouble.

Listen to what CPrompt has said and you should be on your way to putting together a better site.

trust_no1
Bipolar (III) Inmate

From: outer space
Insane since: May 2002

posted posted 06-29-2002 01:21

this is actually one of my best friends sites and i was just playing with you all.

<img src=My Documents/image.bmp.u.Suck.img>

[This message has been edited by trust_no1 (edited 06-29-2002).]

abb
Bipolar (III) Inmate

From: Victoria, BC
Insane since: Mar 2002

posted posted 06-29-2002 02:46

Please, please change the font, get some variety in there!
I would add some Verdana, maybe a bit of Arial (these fonts come standard with win95+, don't know about mac/*nix)
Try to get some variety in colour too, then it would look good.


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Emperor
Maniac (V) Mad Scientist with Finglongers

From: Cell 53, East Wing
Insane since: Jul 2001

posted posted 06-29-2002 04:49
quote:
this is actually one of my best friends sites and i was just playing with you all.



So this wasn't actually a request for a review?

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Trigger
Paranoid (IV) Inmate

From:
Insane since: Jun 2002

posted posted 06-29-2002 05:45

"trust_no1"
so you where "just playing with us" ?

as empty and insignificant as you life may be we all have real work and life's to attend to thus we dont really have time for your "crap"
and we are member's of the Asylum to gain help or to help each other

and we dont really appreciate some small minded person "just playing with us"
and the one letter post's
"a" and "s" you really let your intelligence shine there


or mabye the case is

1) The site is your's and your just to lazy to take in the uggestions given by the guys or to ashamed of the state of it
2)you really dont have a friend and tihink it's funny to request site reviews for your friend site's

personaly i would go with the latter.

I take it my question about the Css was just sloppy codeing mabyea cut andpaste job gone wrong?




[This message has been edited by Trigger (edited 06-29-2002).]

counterfeitbacon
Paranoid (IV) Inmate

From: Vancouver, WA
Insane since: Apr 2002

posted posted 06-29-2002 08:11

I knew it you stupid dipshit!

It just didn't look like your work, or your writing...And it just looks a lot better than your previous work here

Ok...Thats all...

Patrick
Bipolar (III) Inmate

From: Houston, Texas
Insane since: Dec 2001

posted posted 06-29-2002 09:24

ok some words from a person who know the kind of crap i c. I once was and to most still am a sloppy person in web design. You need to go and take the time to learn css and some more html. You can do better than this if you sit down and plan out stuff. you need to make an interesting site. Make it eye catching or something but work on your skills.

As for thise game quater being your "friend's"( i use that loosely) You need to grow some balls and take the comments. I get comments i might not like but i use that to help make my site better.

for some help try:

W3 schools

this is a good place to learn about CSS and HTML

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Emperor
Maniac (V) Mad Scientist with Finglongers

From: Cell 53, East Wing
Insane since: Jul 2001

posted posted 06-29-2002 13:21

trust_no1: I am minded to just shut this thread down but I'll leave it open so you can explain yourself.

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trust_no1
Bipolar (III) Inmate

From: outer space
Insane since: May 2002

posted posted 06-29-2002 18:03

my one letter posts were accidental i posted something and then i relized i did not want to post that so i went in there and tried to delete it, but it said i did not have the authorization so i made it a one letter post because it would not let me delete it or post a blank one

<img src=My Documents/image.bmp.u.Suck.img>

trust_no1
Bipolar (III) Inmate

From: outer space
Insane since: May 2002

posted posted 06-29-2002 18:11

this really is my friends website and i thought i was helping my friend by getting suggestions for him by calling it my own, because i thought that you guys would throw it out if i started out by saying it was my friend's. It would not have been blown out of proportion if cfb and wellfarefraud4u had not contacted the actual maker (my friend) and then before i could get ahold of him for the suggestions i had gotten for him they had already told him via email and i hardly ever use email and was waiting for him to get on msn messenger.

Emperor
Maniac (V) Mad Scientist with Finglongers

From: Cell 53, East Wing
Insane since: Jul 2001

posted posted 06-29-2002 18:25

There is no big deal with getting sites reviewed for people you know but you have to get their permission first. I'm shutting this down - repost this when you have permission or get your friend to drop the site in themselves if they actually want a review.

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