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Hiroki
Paranoid (IV) Inmate

From: NZ
Insane since: Dec 2002

IP logged posted posted 04-17-2003 06:16 Edit Quote

Hi, guys. I have jsut made one page for my Operating System site.
Does this look all right to you?
I mean sometimes cannot see white line around grey box and table.
If so, please tell me.
and do you know why????

http://www32.brinkster.com/sanukiudon/1.doscom-ok.htm
cheers, mate.

ps. a wee bit late to realize.....Hmmm.....

Hiroki Kozai

[This message has been edited by Hiroki (edited 04-17-2003).]

Dracusis
Maniac (V) Inmate

From: Brisbane, Australia
Insane since: Apr 2001

IP logged posted posted 04-17-2003 06:18 Edit Quote

*psst*

A link to the site would be mighty handy.

Hiroki
Paranoid (IV) Inmate

From: NZ
Insane since: Dec 2002

IP logged posted posted 04-18-2003 07:51 Edit Quote

Hm.....this is not what I want at all.
I will figure out the problems.
Hmm....

Hiroki Kozai

DL-44
Maniac (V) Inmate

From: under the bed
Insane since: Feb 2000

IP logged posted posted 04-18-2003 15:51 Edit Quote

The layout seems to work fine.

The colors don't quite work though - the blue is *really* hard to read on that grey, and I'm thinking the grey itself would work better either darker, retaining the white text, or much much lighter and switiching over to black text.

The blue is the biggest issue though....

Emperor
Maniac (V) Mad Scientist with Finglongers

From: Cell 53, East Wing
Insane since: Jul 2001

IP logged posted posted 04-18-2003 17:12 Edit Quote

Hiroki: Just a quick comment (DL is on the money about the colours) but the page seems to be just slightly wider than 100% as I get the HSBoD.

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Hiroki
Paranoid (IV) Inmate

From: NZ
Insane since: Dec 2002

IP logged posted posted 04-19-2003 01:35 Edit Quote

Hi, DL! Hi, Emperor!
Wonderful to hear from you.
I have just nearly solved my ploblems through Slime.
This is new link: http://www32.brinkster.com/sanukiudon/hiro.htm
Much closer to what I desire.
Slime found type errors in my css code.
I changed them and uploaded again.
And Emperor. Yes, it seems to be bigger than 100%. I will fix it later.
Now I am feeling very good.
This afternoon, I am going to help Rosy, who running wine cafe near my house.
My family owns vineyard. You can see it here: www.opihi.co.nz
I love wine!
Cya.

Hiroki Kozai

Veneficuz
Paranoid (IV) Inmate

From: A graveyard of dreams
Insane since: Mar 2001

IP logged posted posted 04-19-2003 02:43 Edit Quote

Looks good. Nice code you've got so far, easy to read

To make the site a little bit more 'interesting' to look at you might want to consider adding another color. Giving the menu-links a light blue color might work.

You should also do something to distinguise the text from the code in the description area. As it is now it is hard to know the difference between what you are supposed to write and what parts are your comments. The "normal" way to distinguise between them is to have the code written in a monospace font, for example Courier, and it if the code spans several lines add some kind of border around it.

A little bit bigger padding between the 'white box that surrounds the links when you hover over them' and the text might also be a good idea. As it is now the white box's edge is very close to the text. It is still easy to read, but it might be even easier with a couple of more pixels between them...

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Hiroki
Paranoid (IV) Inmate

From: NZ
Insane since: Dec 2002

IP logged posted posted 04-19-2003 09:11 Edit Quote

Thanks a lot, mate. I will consider about those points.
Many many thanks to you.
Cya.


Hiroki Kozai



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