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Bmud
Bipolar (III) Inmate

From: Raleigh, NC
Insane since: Mar 2001

IP logged posted posted 02-17-2004 20:07 Edit Quote

http://development.gurusnetwork.com/discussion/thread/2480/

PC Wizard (Flash)
This is a commission that I just finished recently. After showing it to mahjqa I got a lot of the bugs out. Now i'm interested in what you all think.
http://www.osysi.net/pcwiz/
(may change in the future. my site is in wacky revamping)

Shine and shine. :: [Cell=992] :: [See my team's 30 second animation]

Boudga
Maniac (V) Mad Scientist

From: Jacks raging bile duct....
Insane since: Mar 2000

IP logged posted posted 02-17-2004 20:56 Edit Quote

wow...that's nice...I'd like to see more...the intro is a bit long but still very nice

Bmud
Bipolar (III) Inmate

From: Raleigh, NC
Insane since: Mar 2001

IP logged posted posted 02-18-2004 01:11 Edit Quote

I know what you mean about it being too long. That's what mahjqa was saying. I just considered making another change so that the "pcwiz4u.com" is always somewhere on the screen, but after the animation is over, it will not matter so much. I'm pretty sure he'll use frames.

Look at the original site... http://www.pcwiz4u.com

Shine and shine. :: [Cell=992] :: [See my team's 30 second animation]

Cameron
Bipolar (III) Inmate

From: Brisbane
Insane since: Jan 2003

IP logged posted posted 02-18-2004 03:37 Edit Quote

Intro is definatly too long. The text animations is also kinda cheezy and needlessly broken up into two parts.

I think it would work much better if you went straight form the title on plain white to the cloud animation, skipping the rest as it isn't really needed. The slogan could be animated in the background or perhaps just under the logo itself. I really don't see any need to be hand feeding the slogan to the user letter by letter.

my 0.2

Boudga
Maniac (V) Mad Scientist

From: Jacks raging bile duct....
Insane since: Mar 2000

IP logged posted posted 02-18-2004 12:19 Edit Quote

yeah the letter by letter animation is the part when my mouse trigger finger started getting itchy too...



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