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Black Hat
Bipolar (III) Inmate

From: Sin City (Can you guess where?)
Insane since: Sep 2004

IP logged posted posted 11-24-2004 11:55 Edit Quote

Ok, here is the URL: http://lostcitytinnos.net/

Now, I know I need to convert the tables to .CSS - but that'll be a new road for me and IXI said he'd work with me on it and Ive already learned a lot. Be honest, throw your suggestions at me, I already know you guys are going to hammer me.

Things I already know:

**need to convert tables to .CSS (I will eventually)
***Need to clean up the code (I too will obsess over it eventually).

So, aside from that, go ahead... Hammer on me!

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DL-44
Maniac (V) Inmate

From: under the bed
Insane since: Feb 2000

IP logged posted posted 11-24-2004 13:31 Edit Quote

Well, to be totally honest...

I don't know what I am supposed to review exactly.

You've got an image, which for some reason I haven't looked into I can't actually see - it's just black. If I right-click and view image, I see it no problem. Back to the page...can't see it.

Other than that, it's a column of links, and a block of text, mostly saying "nothing here, come back later".

In addition, I am guessing that the image in question is not one that you made? If I am correct in that, I am curious what the source of the image is.

I don't know what you're looking for here, or what exactly needs reviewing.

Black Hat
Bipolar (III) Inmate

From: Sin City (Can you guess where?)
Insane since: Sep 2004

IP logged posted posted 11-24-2004 13:38 Edit Quote

I just want overall impressions. Thats all Im really looking for. See, I tried a lot of new stuff with this and it took me awhile and even tho its easy for you guys, it wasn't for me. Im phishing for compliments :P

And the image is from Stargate Atlantis :/

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DL-44
Maniac (V) Inmate

From: under the bed
Insane since: Feb 2000

IP logged posted posted 11-24-2004 15:15 Edit Quote

overall impression I think I summed up above...

There's just nothing there to review. I don't mean to belittle your efforts in this, it's great that you are trying new approaches, and opening your eyes up to CSS and the like.

It's not unnactractive.
But....It's just a black page with a column of text links...

I have no idea what Stargate Atlantis is. How does it tie into what you're doing?

poi
Paranoid (IV) Inmate

From: France
Insane since: Jun 2002

IP logged posted posted 11-24-2004 16:14 Edit Quote

Dl-44: Stargate: Atlantis is the sequel of the Stargate SG-1 TV serie, which itself is the TV adaptation of the Stargate movie. Btw, Black Hat, don't you think it'd be "nice" to add a copyright ?

Black Hat
Bipolar (III) Inmate

From: Sin City (Can you guess where?)
Insane since: Sep 2004

IP logged posted posted 11-25-2004 00:15 Edit Quote
quote:
poi said:

Dl-44: Stargate: Atlantis is the sequel of the Stargate SG-1 TV serie, which itself is the TV adaptation of the Stargate movie. Btw, Black Hat, don't you think it'd be "nice" to add a copyright ?



I plan to.

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Jestah
Maniac (V) Mad Scientist

From: Long Island, NY
Insane since: Jun 2000

IP logged posted posted 11-28-2004 20:44 Edit Quote

Like DL said, its just a black background, some white text, and an image. It doesn't make much of an impression. Maybe spend a bit more time browsing around and trying new things?

UnknownComic
Maniac (V) Inmate

From: 2 steps away from a los angeles curb
Insane since: Nov 2003

IP logged posted posted 11-29-2004 02:00 Edit Quote

The picture should link to something... Perhaps you can link to another page that tells why you like that picture. It's got alt text but there is no info.


A tiny little copyright "C" and where you got the pic from would be good...
cuz' the little copyright link at the bottom points to a "Not Found" page.

Of course there is nothing wrong with M$ bashing, it's a recognized 'Web Sport', but it also should be noted that the big news story these days is that IE's market share has dropped to 90%.

90%! Hate them or not, 90% of the people out there use them... so rather than bash what those 90% are using, perhaps it would be better to just make your site conform. Resistance is futile. Prepare to be assimilated.


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Is This Thing On?

Webbing; the stuff that sticks to your face.



[EDIT] Aurghh! Stupid Typos! It's all IE's fault![/edit]

(Edited by UnknownComic on 11-29-2004 02:03)

outcydr
Paranoid (IV) Inmate

From: out there
Insane since: Oct 2001

IP logged posted posted 11-29-2004 04:49 Edit Quote

looks ok to me

i'm sure it will improve as you learn

one thing you could loose to improve it the most would be the foul language

it give one a sense that you have a bad attitude

thus discouraging repeat visitors

unless of course you are catering to that particular crowd

Bristney
Neurotic (0) Inmate
Newly admitted

From:
Insane since: Feb 2008

IP logged posted posted 03-06-2008 10:27 Edit Quote

hi,

I can't load your site. there is error in link.

Good luck

Bristney

poi
Paranoid (IV) Inmate

From: Norway
Insane since: Jun 2002

IP logged posted posted 03-06-2008 10:46 Edit Quote

the original post/thread is ~4 years old.

Arthurio
Paranoid (IV) Inmate

From: cell 3736
Insane since: Jul 2003

IP logged posted posted 03-06-2008 12:58 Edit Quote

maybe that's the infamous slashdot effect...

poi
Paranoid (IV) Inmate

From: Norway
Insane since: Jun 2002

IP logged posted posted 03-06-2008 12:59 Edit Quote

Most likely.



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