Topic: what u guys think? (Page 1 of 1)

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(Edited by apocalyptic_rabbit on 11-29-2004 06:18)

I like it.
The red text is painful on the eyes considering the background, and Times New Roman isn't the best font you could have had. Nevertheless it is otherwise a well done site. Nice one.

thank you very much

i was thuinking of changing the font to something that would go with the theme a little better, just never reall looked into it

I always wondered, how was the logo spinnign onyour machine??

it always looked fine from mine but i never really gotten it from an outside source other then my other comp or school.

I didn't go past the first page.....

Get a doctype!
Take some time to learn and love css.
If you must use tables (which you don't need to), at least use css with them.
Get rid of the depreciated tags.
The frames are unnecessary and look like crap from my end.
Using an image map for navigation is unecessary.

Spending some time here will get you started on fixing the above stuff.

Red text on a black bg is tough on the eyes. Especially the wee lil text on the right. I can't even read it. Though, I have to say, blue text is worse!

'chaos' and 'designs' are full of jaggies.

The head/nav image weighs in at over 135k... yikes! The spinning thing is quite annoying, but to each his own.....

Fixing this stuff should keep you busy for awhile...

Ok let me do one of master suho's uncousines reviews.
where i just type the thought that pop in muy head.

<start>
Mmm so lets see there should be something spinning, but don't know what.
Click to enter is says under the fireworks thingy, nothing happens let me try again, nothing.
Maybe i should try the fireworks thingy. Yes now something happens wha do we have here?
There are some pics and an strange spinning and flickering thing on top, mmm no mouse over indication on the screen. Thankgod he didn't alter my cursor. Red text on black it's ok if it's your taste. O look there are more flickering things below, seems some kind of like box so this is some kind of hobby project i guess.
The side text box must be unimportant when it's so hard to read.
Now lets see where those links go to.
Home: "i see another refresh-button" link. Staff art: backgrounds on the right let's see what this various artwork is about. ouch that tabel is ugly and those texts are to small let's see HD fatboy..whoa white background christ the picture is nice though bit it's a shame that it isn't incorparated in the site. Just a link to the pic.. Let's see that second sig...whoa another white background and that after that black.
Ok i better take at those wallpapers. Where is that backlink button oh i see on top of the little red box
click and here is that wallpaper again. Mmm that spinning thing is getting on my nerves
What was i doing? ofcourse, the wallpapers click
now let's see i might like that cia thing click What the F. I am zapped back lets try another one then
click orb click what? back again? So this thing doesn't work. That spinning thing doesn't ever stop god now i am lookin at it again. Concentrate let's inspect the Tutorials click Text effects click mm only a tutorial logo no info mmm maybe this one is not online yet i better try another no back button let me click on tutorials again.
Web Layout click look there is that tutorials logo again. This site isn't nearly finished i wonder should i look any further?? Maybe i should try the Help section, wonder why he made such thing on a website.
Click, under construction it says so it's the same as the rest of the site.
I am looking at that spinning thing again o my the logos on top all have jaggies, so much for professionlism..
The "contact us" is left i gues that is section is working. click yes it is... in an ugly `90 tabel again. And those are mailto links so i better not click on them otherwise i have to close down my eamiler again. There is nothing i have to say. Maybe i should send him a mail about that typo, nah he will see this soon enough
<end>

You need to put some more work in it.

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ouch,

well i am trying,

I am just learning css, and you guys are right about everything else


I got SHUT DOWN

I consider my bubble completly burst

Well don't give up see you come here and get torn apart only for one reason to learn and improve.
Ofcourse we could tell you what we liked.... but what's the fun in that? Besides what could you learn from it?

Keep on trying

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