Topic awaiting preservation: some critique on a project? (Page 1 of 1)

I made this image (wallpaper at first) for fun, but then I decided to submit it for the Pennsylvania computer fair. I changed it a bit from the original so I would like some critique. Ill upload the original too.
http://punk.dyndns.biz:3080/~punk/upload/index.php

girlwallpaperfinal.jpg is the current image and girlwallpaper2.jpg is the original.

Thanks in advance for any critique

errrr... I have not yet looked at the files but your uploader is not password protected at all... anyone can upload anything to that space... just fyi.

Its not my uploader its my friends. I just use it once in a while to host images. He has a max file size and you can only up specific filetypes. He has it publicly on his website anyway