Topic: Your opinion please (Page 1 of 1)

Cheers all!
I'd like syour opinion in this sketch. What do you think about the "house" layout? Its for that real estate site again... for those of you who remember!
http://clients.patricdesign.com/cc/testing2.gif

Looking forward to all suggestions and comments!

<´¯`·.¸ Patric ¸.·´¯`>

pd: I remember well and I like the simple look and feel of this but pos. not the tuquiosey (sp?) colour. However, it does contrast well with the white and makes the house shape stand out. Looks good.

Emps

looks like an arrow to me

--Lurch--

Nice simplistic Design, I would give more input but I don't speak the language

Thanx! To make things clearer I've made it look more like a house. This will probably give you a better idea of the intention with the "windows" in the house.
http://clients.patricdesign.com/cc/testing3.gif

I changed the color slightly as well but i can't do much because cyan is the corp. identity color of them.
Changed the language to english as welll! :-)

<´¯`·.¸ Patric ¸.·´¯`>

pd: Nice touches - I like them. Now go and transform it into HTML and we can see how it works!! Sorry I'm never comfortable giving reviews on just images.

Emps

Even in the latest version, it still looks like an arrow to me. Mainly cause the 'body' of the house is too high. I recommend shortening the body of the house and/or adding a side porch or garage or something to remove the arrow-look.

I agree with BeeKay; it looks like an arrow, but that might change when you transform into HTML.


-= Veneficuz =-

"Faith: not wanting to know what is true. "- Friedrich Nietzsche

It's a bit too plain in my oppinion. I would emphasize more on the inverting text, try experimenting.

[This message has been edited by benev (edited 03-15-2002).]