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Hi Emps! 'm certainly no expert but here are my thoughts: "1. How readable is the text. The light colour of the text on that background might not work (I think it does but I need an opinion)." **I believe the text is sufficiently readable. Maybe a *little* more contrast "2. Does the concept stink? I was aiming for something papery and Oriental but whenever I try things like this I usual push it too far and it looks awful. I was going to add some marks and features to 'dirty up the edges, for example, but didn't want to run before I could walk." **Well, the concept is great! I particularly like the way you used psuedo-oreintal letters to spell the link names. "3. Is it obvious what the main navigation links say." **They aren't obvious and even though I picked up on it, some people might not get it, however it's very original and with a few small color accents will be really sweet. :) "1. The colour is slightly off on the Emperor logo (it looks OK on my monitor but this TFT screen takes no prisoners)." **It looks compatible with the rest of the page from here. "2. I've gone for a single peixel line behind the navigation but the anti-aliasing of the letters breaks up the look (esp. noticeable for me at 800x600) so I suspect I'll have to incorporate the line" **I second what velvetrose said about this. "3. Possibly the font size and spacing on the logo should be changed to match the navigation (or not - thoughts?)." **The combination seems workable to me. I am hoping for a different color for the text. You're right though, it's hard to find a color to go with brown. Muted blues seem to.. Nice job Emps! Nice papery feel and despite what others say about the oriental looking letters, I like the implementation in this case. [url=http://www.way-side.com/cgi-bin/yabb/YaBB.cgi]Allewyn: Left Along the WaySide[/url]
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