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maninacan
Paranoid (IV) Inmate

From: Seattle, WA, USA
Insane since: Oct 2001

IP logged posted posted 03-31-2002 05:16 Edit Quote

ok so the site isn't open to the public yet, as you'll see by going to http://www.kewlster.com, but here's the finished version: http://kewlster.com/index.php It still needs oodles of content, but just tell me what you hate about the design. Oh yes, and what you like would be nice too.

http://www.kewlster.com

vogonpoet
Maniac (V) Mad Scientist

From: Mi, USA
Insane since: Aug 2000

IP logged posted posted 03-31-2002 05:26 Edit Quote

NN4.76

cant read a thing?

what I can see, a blue/black grdline bg, some text that is illegible, and a title graphic that is kinda dodgy

Got these javascript errors fyi

quote:
JavaScript Error: http://www.geocities.com/egodofwar/smurf.html, line 18:

geovisit is not defined.
JavaScript Error: http://kewlster.com/scripts/clock.js,
line 33:

document.all has no properties.
JavaScript Error: http://kewlster.com/scripts/clock.js,
line 33:

document.all has no properties.




It probably looks great in newer browsers

fallacy
Nervous Wreck (II) Inmate

From: Canada
Insane since: Jan 2002

IP logged posted posted 03-31-2002 07:53 Edit Quote

Here we go...
I checked in IE6, I don't have other browsers on the computer I'm on, so lets talk design...

Ok I like the navigation's appearance. I think you should put the actual navigation part of it (ie. Homes, games...) on the left. People read left to right generally, so it's a wee bit more natural than looking in the center. That's just my preference though... hell, I shouldn't really talk... my navigation on my site is aligned right ( http://www27.brinkster.com/fallasee ).

I don't care much for your logo. When I hear the word "kewlster", I think of something a little more modern... perhaps if you could get a cartoon of some dude just sittin' there lookin' all hip and shit with the word "kewlster" on it. That'd be pretty keen

VG talked about illegibility. He's very right. I can't read some of the green text in that dragging job. You might want to make a less contrasting background, or one that contrasts in a way that isn't terribly eye grabbing.

Actually, like someone said in your tag box... "down with blue" use a wee bit less or something.

FYI: the ftp link seems broken.

Hope this helps a bit.

- the big wannbe, me -

[This message has been edited by fallacy (edited 03-31-2002).]

Hew
Neurotic (0) Inmate
Newly admitted Neurotic (0) Inmate
Newly admitted
IP logged posted posted 04-01-2002 12:29 Edit Quote

I really think you should try match everything with the gradient, that looks good, but not with the rest, it just doesnt match the white navbar at the top. Also , the logo doesnt suit.

Also .. Is there any point in having a dragable navbar ?

maninacan
Paranoid (IV) Inmate

From: Seattle, WA, USA
Insane since: Oct 2001

IP logged posted posted 04-03-2002 01:13 Edit Quote

Thanks, I think I'll do that,
Also about the dragable nav bar, there is no point whatsoever, it's just a fun little thing that I just learned so I put it on there.

http://www.kewlster.com



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