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Your Text: Insert Slimies » Insert UBB Code » Close Last Tag \| All Tags UBB Help	I tend to be picky about content. From your home page: "Some people know us for our world-class managed ecommerce solutions, yet others acknowledge our design skills. While there are some who swear by our expertise in Web multimedia." --"While there are some" ... is a sentence fragment. I know you are trying to get it to flow with the previous sentence, but it doesn't work. Restructure the whole deal by sticking a period after "solutions," a comma after "skills," and splicing your sentence fragment on the end there. It will flow much better. "We understand todays need for economical, ..." --"todays" needs to be "today's" "Your e-business strategy" -- Since you use the dash in e-business, I would recommend you use the dash in ecommerce in your first paragraph. " ... the glamorous gizmos and the slick animations but is that what you really need, to achieve your objective on the Net?" --Slap a comma after "but," and yank out the comma after "need." From the Site Redesign section: "Comp-Act makes sure to reach customers with all major browsers. Netscape, Internet Explorer or Opera. Our cross browser designs ensure that all your customers see your web site." --ummmmmm, didn't you say that your site does not work in older browsers? :) From the Small Business section: In your price chart make sure to change "anual" to "annual." And throughout the site you spell Quick Quote differently. Sometimes you have it as one word and sometimes two. I told you I was picky about content ... ;) The design is decent. Not really a reach out and grab you kinda deal, but it serves nicely. I'm not too crazy about the city skyline being tiled like it is. It is just too obvious that it is the same small chunk over and over. No big deal, though; just something that bugged me. The drop shadow under "Let us create your web presence" makes the text hard to read. Can you enlarge "Comp-Act" or maybe make it a different color? It just blends in with the background blue too much. [url=http://www.haughtbk.com] [img]http://www.haughtbk.com/shrooms.jpg[/img] [/url] Loading...
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