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Your Text: Insert Slimies » Insert UBB Code » Close Last Tag \| All Tags UBB Help	Well, since everyone else has done a pretty good job of 'critique-ing' your site, I thought I'd concentrate on your writing...ok, it's not bad...however, from someone who has written a bit...it is always better when one writes from what one knows...since you write a lot from war, I was just wondering...have you been in one? My impression is, that you have not been. Why? Because I have, and although your writing is pretty good, I don't really get the impression of what war is really like, esp. for an individual. Otherwise, the writing style is pretty decent, esp. considering your age... [img]http://www.nullinterrupt.de/grafik/indianfaceoa.gif[/img] Loading...
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