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Your Text: Insert Slimies » Insert UBB Code » Close Last Tag \| All Tags UBB Help	mmm.... elaboration... okay... My meaning behind the "thumbnail" comment about the [b]STORY[/b] section..... mmm... yes. You see, you have an "art" section... and you have a "story" section.. So why not combine your creative efforts and create some art that depicts the specific scene in each part. For instance.... in part 1, "aurith".... you open by describing these abandoned university buildings.... Why not have a little thumbnail to an image you've created that suits the scene. You've told us in words what these buildings are like..... let us see what you see in your mind. I realize that most writers hope that a reader will create an image in their own mind of what the scene is like.... However..... you could give us your interpretation by having an art piece per part. This is nothing major mind you.... this is a simple suggestion....... something that just happened to cross my mind the first time I was looking through your site. This most certainly falls into the "bells and whistles" category..... so please, by all means.... tend to the layout/usability issues far before approaching something as miniscule as this. Press on.... let us know how the updates go. Cheers. =) Loading...
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