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Your Text: Insert Slimies » Insert UBB Code » Close Last Tag \| All Tags UBB Help	Oh boy, proofreading! :D I just took a look at the ME section (didn't want to overwhelm you...), and here are a few things that stuck out ("P" stands for "paragraph"): [b]P1: I've finally come a across[/b] You'll want to take out the extra "a" there. [b]P2: to accommodate for any additional needs such as that[/b] You don't need the "for," it's kind of "built in" to accomodate. [b]P3: (far be it a good one)[/b] This one is a bit weird. I suppose you could insert a "from" after "it," but that is still weird. I would go for something like "albeit not the best one," or something like that. [b]P3: There is probably something interests everybody on here somewhere[/b] How about "something to interest everybody"? [b]P3: While you're here you will probably noticed gratuitous references to Douglas Adam's Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy series, its because I think that it's one of the greatest works in American literature since Hamlet.[/b] There's an extra "d" on "notice." Also, I would just say "English literature," since it makes the following disclaimer unnecessary. I'm not sure why you would want to say "American literature" anyway, but that's your call :). [b]P4: my God given name.[/b] Should be "God-given" [b]P5: There is no substitution when it comes to making graphics[/b] "There is no substitute" [b]P7: I still love to play computer games (who doesn't?) [/b] You need a period directly after the parentheses to close off the sentence (punctuation inside parentheses doesn't count). Well, I hope that wasn't too nit-picky. I love the look of the site, by the way--but proofreading is probably what I do best, so I thought I'd try to help out there. It's a very nifty site, though. [img]http://hwarang_.tripod.com/suho1004_sig3.txt[/img] [url=http://www.ozoneasylum.com/Forum14/HTML/000899.html]What does it mean?[/url] Loading...
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