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hallon: Glad to see you dispensed with the frames - you'll not regret it. Some thoughts: 1. The background colour - its a flying school isn't it so that colour could work nicely for you there. 2. DU and WS have touched on this area but doing something like this is all about 'suspension of disbelief' - making people think they are actually seeing some hi-tech interface and so even the smallest touch can help add to the effect but problems will spoil the illusion. The jaggies and the need for slightly more (hyper) realism has been mentioned but I would also not use a styled text link in the bar - work it in with the graphical theme so possibly give the text an embossed look and throw a rollover in there (in fact you might want to make the top left corner graphuc change as it help to add to the idea of it being a joined up piece). The screws on the miffle left don't look quite right either (there looks to be a problem with the top right). The navigation bar and left panel would probably have some kind of suspension in real life too. 3. For me there is a missing character in 'G_bok' in the top bar and 'Intr_' in the club information section (in IE6 - Op6 works OK) - they are both a umlautes so use the HTML special character ä and define the content-type in a meta tag. 4. The connecting pipe effect doesn't work in Op6 but does in IE6. It could be the setting of the spring width to 3%. I'd try and do that by having the spring tile across behind the buttons. 5. Fill in those ALT attributes. I like the progress you've made The graphics probably need a little polish to make them look more 'real' and they could do with a few tweaks to make them work cross-browser but I can think this is coming along nicely. Emps
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