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TiN2K-D: Well I think some of the important points have been hit (splash screen and popup) but I think the cartoon look could work but it needs to be implemented better. Some other thoughts: 1. There is far too little room for the text. Don't be afraid to lay transparent layers over your graphics. 2. Kill the IE6 image bar. 3. The text box doesn't fit with the rest of the design. What I'd aim for is using all of the screen, Make it fluid and throw some more elements in - its a hard balance between a 'cartoon-primitive' look and just childish so make it look like that is just how you planned it (work the navigation into the design too). Increase the space assigned to the text. Its an interesting concept but needs to look more polished to carry things off. Emps
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