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TiN2K-D
Nervous Wreck (II) Inmate

From: stockholm, sweden
Insane since: Mar 2002

IP logged posted posted 05-03-2002 13:36 Edit Quote

Hey...Im doing a team page for a very, very good fotball team in sweden(not). They are a bounche of teenages that plays in like division 8. They wanted a dangerus but funny look on the page, cartoon like. So this is what I came up with http://ibg.dot.nu . The page it´s in swedish...only so you know.

give me some feedback on the gfx, it´s not so very much fore now but it´s coming more very soon...





[This message has been edited by TiN2K-D (edited 05-03-2002).]

InI
Paranoid (IV) Mad Scientist

From: Somewhere over the rainbow
Insane since: Mar 2001

IP logged posted posted 05-03-2002 13:49 Edit Quote

The poster has demanded we remove all his contributions, less he takes legal action.
We have done so.
Now Tyberius Prime expects him to start complaining that we removed his 'free speech' since this message will replace all of his posts, past and future.
Don't follow his example - seek real life help first.

WebShaman
Maniac (V) Mad Scientist

From: Happy Hunting Grounds...
Insane since: Mar 2001

IP logged posted posted 05-03-2002 16:53 Edit Quote

Well....after climbing through the 'ruckus' I find the 'art' to be...childish. Could be done much better. As for the pop-ups...I hate pop-ups!!! Especially when it ain't necessary. Also, why do you need a splash page??!!?? That should go, IMHO. My first impression...start anew. I'll leave the rest for someone else, I've got to go rest my head...



[This message has been edited by WebShaman (edited 05-03-2002).]

InI
Paranoid (IV) Mad Scientist

From: Somewhere over the rainbow
Insane since: Mar 2001

IP logged posted posted 05-03-2002 19:46 Edit Quote

The poster has demanded we remove all his contributions, less he takes legal action.
We have done so.
Now Tyberius Prime expects him to start complaining that we removed his 'free speech' since this message will replace all of his posts, past and future.
Don't follow his example - seek real life help first.

Emperor
Maniac (V) Mad Scientist with Finglongers

From: Cell 53, East Wing
Insane since: Jul 2001

IP logged posted posted 05-04-2002 03:31 Edit Quote

TiN2K-D: Well I think some of the important points have been hit (splash screen and popup) but I think the cartoon look could work but it needs to be implemented better. Some other thoughts:

1. There is far too little room for the text. Don't be afraid to lay transparent layers over your graphics.

2. Kill the IE6 image bar.

3. The text box doesn't fit with the rest of the design.

What I'd aim for is using all of the screen, Make it fluid and throw some more elements in - its a hard balance between a 'cartoon-primitive' look and just childish so make it look like that is just how you planned it (work the navigation into the design too). Increase the space assigned to the text.

Its an interesting concept but needs to look more polished to carry things off.

Emps

Thumper
Paranoid (IV) Inmate

From: Deeetroit, MI. USA
Insane since: Mar 2002

IP logged posted posted 05-05-2002 08:56 Edit Quote

Well I've never seen arms like that (save Gumby)...Does the middle finger represent something sporty in Sweden? (no offense Doc)Cus here it means f*** you. I think it is a complementary gesture in Morocco though. I'll let the codesters strangle you on your lines...If you ask me though, I think you were very lazy with the cartoons. If you do not want to take the time to make nice limbs (smudge tool?), then maybe draw the picture out and then scan it for more control! The cartoons really seem like they are in line with each other, but I think if you used the same concept and cleaned things up it would look a whole lot nicer...unless of course you are going for that sloppy look, then by all means...

marf
Bipolar (III) Inmate

From: Canada
Insane since: Oct 2001

IP logged posted posted 05-05-2002 15:08 Edit Quote

not worth my time **sigh**



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