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Ah! A fellow journaler! It's nice to see someone starting out who isn't on diaryland, live-journal or somesuch. Maybe I'm just a snob. I like the overall layout and color scheme. The graphic at the top is great. I have a personal preference for traditional capitalized sentences, but I recognize all lowercase is trendy in your demographic. Likewise, justified *looks* nicer, but I find it more difficult to read since browsers can only insert space between words, and the space between words is how we tell where sentences begin. Like the lowercase, it's a personal choice and yours is just as valid as mine. As a new reader, I like so see navigation at the bottom of the entries. A minimum should be a link to the next entry. It makes is a lot easier to if I can go from one entry to the next without scrolling to the top or backing up to the archives page. You've got the foundation for a Cast List page in your exit/links page. It wouldn't take much to flesh out the concept--popups maybe. Again, it's a nice touch for new readers. The line about your trigger takes on a different meaning after reading your 5/3 entry. Powerful stuff. It's a great start. Keep writing! <edit> Ooops! Sorry. I misread the dates on your archives page. Not the newbie I thought. </edit> "the most incredible feats are often accomplished by those who have had the most incredible challenges" [This message has been edited by brucew (edited 05-09-2002).]
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