Topic: thoughts? (Page 1 of 1)

www.mackaborn.com

not designed by me, but was asked for comments? Comments emphasis on graphical content/layout rather than content.

cheers ~Vp~

Here are just a few things as I click through the pages:

Front Page:
Even though It says in the right corner "Mackaborn Rhythm Artists" I still had a hard time telling exactly what the site was about.
Even after that I still didn't know exactly what the site was "About". I feel that the picture would do better if it were centered.
The color scheme is not right. The black background, black/white pics, funky blue nav, and red links. It no work for me.
Silly silly font tags.

Profile
MY GOD MY EYES!!!! That is one hideous yellow there!

Artists
Not really sure what this page is about??? Are these people that are involved in the project or something? Are those there logos? I never really cared for using "click here" I think it makes it look cheap.

Newswire
It's just text. There's not really anything to talk about there. White background for some reason.

sonic
Now we're back to the black background again with just text. Those silly silly font tags. eeekkkk.... Now the links are blue???

Striho
Everything is on the right side. That is kind of strange. That red background is aweful. Not as bad as the yellow but damn near it.

Secrets
Well its a picture a logo thingy and some text.

OK I am going to stop there. Just a few things. There really are no graphics to comment on. The layout would be bad but there isn't really anything there except for a few pictures and some text. The pages are VERY inconsistant with each other. There isn't one thing that links the pages together.

The blue nav bar really is TOO light. The font tags have got to go. On my computer I can barely read what it says so I have to adjust the Text Size, bummer. The red and blue links don't work well with the black background. It is really hard on the eyes.

The main things that really bug me are the colors and those font tags. I can deal with not much graphics but man those color have got to go.

I hope I wasn't sounding rude


Later,
C:\


~Binary is best~

not at all Cprompt, thanks for the review. The guy who paid for this site was asking for opinions on it, so i said I would try and get a few from ppl.

If any one else feels like adding some more ops they would be appreciated ~Vp~

I know I am not a web designer or anything but that is a shame that he had to pay for that. I would have done the site for free


Later,
C:\


~Binary is best~