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Your Text: Insert Slimies » Insert UBB Code » Close Last Tag \| All Tags UBB Help	dave s: I'm a bit rushed so I'll throw in some quick thoughts and get back to you later with anything else I think of: First design: My personal favourite. I like the colours and some of the things you are doing - some points: 1. It is far too 'busy'. That top area has far too much going on. 2. There are far too many styles on the page - with your title graphic contrasting with the oval buttons which contrast with those horizontal lines. You need to decide on a feel for the page and then pursue it (any of the 3 or 4 different feels that are in your page could be expanded into different pages). 3. Te page is too full - you've tried too hard and added far more than is needed on the page. Think about point 2 and when you go for a single theme/feel try to make things a little more sparse (however, this may be related to point 1 too). Second design: Its not reall working for me. It seems to suffer from similar problems to that above and: 1. I don't like that yellow. 2. It all seems a little cramped on the screen. 3. You seem to be using two different backgrounds on the page and then the scrolling panel. You should think carefully before using one. 4. The graphics look are too strongly contrasted with the background - I'd want to merge them more seamlessly. Overall I think you should concentrate on the first design but tease out a few elements (probably given the domain name the Olde Englishe look. And congrats on the domain - good find) and then design the game around that. Its got good colours and some good ideas so I'd go with that. ___________________ Emps FAQs: [url=http://faq.ozoneasylum.com/FaqWiki/shownode.php?id=53]Emperor[/url] Loading...
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