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Your Text: Insert Slimies » Insert UBB Code » Close Last Tag \| All Tags UBB Help	Not enough contrast! From white to grey there just isn't enough contrast to make me want to stick around. Espically since the only contrasting bits are a ghastly bright green. I'd go for a different green with one other colour and some more contrast in the text. After all, your trying to pimp that text, not the logo or menu. Or use a different green, again with more variation and contrast in the textual areas. The mouseovers don't quite fit. They also change too much. The background changes, the texture changes (hello scanlines) and the colour changes plus a little arrow apears. You also need some other element to anchor the top of the menu. You have the first menu option inline with the top of the text which is fine but the logo sitting to the right leaves a hole in the design just above the menu. This makes it feel like something you've just slapped on or something floating about rather uncomfortably. I'm not sure about the spans of grey in there either. They not communicating anything to be beyond, ?Hey look, I?m a grey wavy span, aren't I trendy?. Which isn't really all that bad but I think they?re a little too loud. As far as background noise goes, you've got a little too much contrast here for such a simple site. Although maybe just making the text darker would make me notice it less eh. You should also try to use such elements to draw the viewers eye to something. As the moment it?s grabbing my eye and throwing it off the page. Not cool. [url=http://dracusis.deviantart.com/] [img]http://www.whatever.net.au/~cameron/ozone/ArtDecoSiggy.gif[/img] [/url] [This message has been edited by Dracusis (edited 06-04-2002).] Loading...
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