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Your Text: Insert Slimies » Insert UBB Code » Close Last Tag \| All Tags UBB Help	I noticed a few typos in your texts and thought it couldn't be bad to point them out: The first line should be "Multifood was founded [b]on[/b] September 27th, 1991. Our main activities..." Though I don't think that everyone needs to know when exactly in September 1991 it was founded... but that's your choice. Instead of "to EU and USA" it should be "to the EU and the USA". As far as I know (but what do I know, I'm no native English speaker after all :o) there is no plural of "food". And to me, "tropical fruits" sounds better than "tropical fruit". At the end of the products page's first paragraph it should be "to EU countries and [b]the[/b] USA" again. "Our fruit grow in famous Serbian regions ... and others." That's it for the typos. The design is nice and clean, the only thing you should think about is, as OlssonE already mentioned, the centered logo's orange border: I'd either make it a little bolder or remove it completely. [url=http://faq.ozoneasylum.com/FaqWiki/shownode.php?id=282]kuckus (cell #282)[/url] [This message has been edited by kuckus (edited 06-11-2002).] Loading...
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