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First impression: "is that it?" I don't like this crappy text that you're using for "the webmaster guild......... keep it real" stuff. It's at the bottom of the page as well..... "design by sphincter... blah blah" I'm not all that sure of what effect/look you're going for here. I mean..... it's completely hollow.... and there's lines running every which direction for no apparent reason. I see no flow to this site. And if you really wanna get nit picky/stoopid...... it looks like the orange line is 1 pixel off from the blue/grey line in the upper right. I dunno if that's intentional or not. The simple fact that I don't know if it's intentional or not, is reasoning enough to change it. At the moment... the progression of this site only has things loading on that left side. You're whole navigation takes up the entire layout (which doesn't span the screen I might add)..... and yet you shuffle all your content that the navigation calls.... into a small rectangle on the left portion of the screen. It just doesn't make sense my friend. And that little scrolly thing...... couldn't you make it stop at the bottom of the text or something... Even with an added effort, I find it hard to like anything that's going on here. The layout seems cheap, weak, and ineffective. You leave space at the top for a banner-style layout.... yet the only thing up there is some text in a crappy font, that is for some ungodly reason followed by "keep it real". I realize I'm not handing out an abundance of alternative ideas at the moment.... but I think that sitting down and sorting all of this out on paper is the route to go. A whole new plan of attack; Re-defining your purpose, audience, and content..... and most certainly making a group effort for a new layout. If you expect people to come to you for assistance.... then dammit the layout's gotta be smooth and highly usable.... An eight year old kid with good skills could make this thing with an etch-a-sketch. [This message has been edited by Michael (edited 06-29-2002).]
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