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Your Text: Insert Slimies » Insert UBB Code » Close Last Tag \| All Tags UBB Help	Also (sorry to pop up again...), you might want to look over the copy, since it [b]is[/b] a writers' site. Here are a few of the things that jumped out at me: [From the main page] "It was the first independent universe to come out of the wake of the vote to form rec.arts.comics.creative..." The phrase "come out of the wake of the vote" seems a bit odd to me, but it may just be a difference in stylistic preferences. Personally, I think "the first independent universe to be created after the vote..." would be a lot smoother. "Some wear masks and call themselves by code-names, others find the concept ridiculous." First of all, no need for the dash in "code names." Secondly, the sentence should either be "...code names; others..." or "...code names, (while/but/etc.) others...." [From the Series page] "Find out how the government responds to the presence of those dubbed "Omegas"." Periods (and other punctuation marks) go to the left of quotes (...dubbed "Omegas."). "The answers to these, plus many other questions can be found in the pages of the series set in the Omega Universe." There should be a comma after "questions." There are also a few errors in the timeline, and I haven't had time to read through all the FAQs. Sorry to be so picky--I probably wouldn't have brought these things up if the site didn't claim to be a writers' site. Anyway, I would have someone look over all the copy on the site. Individual authors should be responsible for checking their own work, of course. Loading...
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