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Very tuff subject to approach... you've done it tastefully. These sort of sites imo can go way over the top... you haven't...don't be pushed there. Now.... Possibly remove the white border around the stained glass window...would have more impact i think. I don't like the font used for "For Every Child." "Words and music by Andy Beeny and Mike SchlippCopyright 2002 All rights reserved.Key of GPerformed by Terra Nova" Too small for my eyes (but I'm old :D) More importantly tho'... you tell me it's in the Key of G but you don't provide the music. Might want to consider that. "If you are interested in contributing to this trust fund please follow the link aboove -- "Buy the CD". There are a few typo's and that might be better phrased... Something like "You can contribute to the trust fund via this link ..." etc Just a few that jumped out... again... good for you for keeping it tasteful.... nj
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