Topic: tribute to a girl (Page 1 of 1)

I hope the site says all that needs to be said. It is not 'live' yet, but will be very soon.
I hope this weekend to add a photo gallery of the musicians recording and engineering. I also have interviewed the little girl's parents and would like to add a page about/from them this weekend.

It was a super rush job, so it isn't as pretty as I'd like...but sometimes simplicity is best (at least that is what I keep telling myself)
For Every Child

And please don't do me, her or the band the injustice of holding back because of the subject. It is important to me this turn out the very best it can. You all are tougher than any client. Give it to me.
Thank you.
mobrul

Very tuff subject to approach... you've done it tastefully. These sort of sites imo can go way over the top... you haven't...don't be pushed there.

Now.... Possibly remove the white border around the stained glass window...would have more impact i think.
I don't like the font used for "For Every Child."

"Words and music by Andy Beeny and Mike SchlippCopyright 2002 All rights reserved.Key of GPerformed by Terra Nova"

Too small for my eyes (but I'm old ) More importantly tho'... you tell me it's in the Key of G but you don't provide the music. Might want to consider that.

"If you are interested in contributing to this trust fund please follow the link aboove -- "Buy the CD".

There are a few typo's and that might be better phrased... Something like "You can contribute to the trust fund via this link ..." etc

Just a few that jumped out... again... good for you for keeping it tasteful....
nj

/me steps out of the "lurker" lobby because this subject hits close to home.....literally
3 miles to be exact. My first impulse was to try to scroll pretty picture down to see the
top of the window. I'm not sure if its cut off intentionally ?? Tastefull and serves a "greater" purpose in my eyes. Thank you. BTW, may i just go to the address shown and pick one up? would be quicker for me.

Very minor here, but I think you should make sure you have your charset metatag in there. You have some characters (apostrophes, mostly) that break in other (non-Western) character sets, so you might want to specify yours as <meta http-equiv="Content-type" content="text/html; charset=ISO-8859-1">. I know it's a really minor thing, and it probably won't be an issue, but it won't hurt to put it in.




Cell 270

Thanks.
Client doesn't like stained glass window. (Actually he likes it, but wants a pic of Casey there instead.)
So it is.
He also wants the Buy the CD page to be the index page. Everything else is "secondary".
So it is.
I also made the title of every page a fancy cursive font...better than the georgia, garamond, serif that was there before.

Shekky is from (in the words of our famous Nelly) "the Lou", huh?
Very good, another one of us here.
Where'd you go to high school? (Sorry...couldn't help it.)
What brings you to our asylum?