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Your Text: Insert Slimies » Insert UBB Code » Close Last Tag \| All Tags UBB Help	Welcome to the Asylum. Nice site, my only advice is on the services page. You may want to consider a more formal grammar when relating business information. I find the wording a little odd for a site selling professional services. The line ?got a business?, just doesn?t sound correct and is informal, the ?G? should at least be capitalized. The services list appears fine but you may with to remain consistent with your case. (ie. Website layout, why not Website Layout) but I could be wrong about this, it?s just personal preference. ?I?ve gained good experience? seem a little understated. If have no price structure, may be best just to remove the pricing copy all together and simply state, contact {insert email link and contact info here} for pricing and information. If you really feel the need to add the information at appears a little unprofessional. Most people understand that contract is signed. I would change the last few lines to read similar to the following. Prices are labor and time based and negotiated at time of contract. Please contact {your info} for additional information. Print services are not provided in house; outsourced print services are available upon request at additional cost. Why offer free services? I know it is nice and it has it?s place, however this kind of work sells it?s self. One doesn?t have to advertise it to the world, not only will you be swamped. Clients will wonder why you are not offering them some fee services. Just a few thoughts, Take it with a grain of salt. jstuartj Loading...
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