Topic: O/Zone Graphics - Version 4

Yeah, i know my websites name is similar to this site, but i didn't know of this site before i gave my site this name a few years back, i actually found this site by searching on google to see if it snatched my site.

I was in this ring before, removed my site because i had to take it down but now its up again, and version 4
http://www.flashdion.dk

i would apreciate any comments/suggestions from you.

Hmmm.... I'm getting a 404, but that happens with me sometimes. I'll have to check back later.

As for the similar name... well, I guess great minds think alike.

[Edit: OK, I got it now. Actually, it looks pretty good. Not much to say about the design, except "nice." Not too little, not too much. I would recommend running a spellchecker on all your pages (the one I caught was "funktional," unless that was on purpose). Also, I would stick to one capitalization convention. If you're going to lowercase your "I"s, do it to all of them, and just make everything lowercase. I don't really like that style, but if that's the way you want to go, you should be consistent.

Hehe, yeah, I'm just nitpicking. Maybe I'll have more to say once the rest of the site goes up. I'm looking forward to seeing the image gallery.]



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[This message has been edited by Suho1004 (edited 09-02-2002).]

Hey O/Zone Graphics. I have seen you around Graphic Forums, right? Cool.

I like your site. It is a style that I have seen quite a few times, but there is a reason that I have seen it a few times. It works!

I like the colors and the style that you have with your graphics.

The only thing that I *don't* like is the splash screen. I have never been a fan of them. They make me click an extra time and it seems annoying to me. If parts of your site don't work in NN then I would suggest for some browser sniffing to determine that for the viewer instead of making them click an extra time to find out that it doesn't work.

It might be best viewed in 1024x768, but it looks fine on my 800x600.


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[This message has been edited by CPrompt (edited 09-03-2002).]

Welcome to the Asylum.

Nice site, my only advice is on the services page. You may want to consider a more formal grammar when relating business information. I find the wording a little odd for a site selling professional services.

The line ?got a business?, just doesn?t sound correct and is informal, the ?G? should at least be capitalized.

The services list appears fine but you may with to remain consistent with your case. (ie. Website layout, why not Website Layout) but I could be wrong about this, it?s just personal preference.

?I?ve gained good experience? seem a little understated.

If have no price structure, may be best just to remove the pricing copy all together and simply state, contact {insert email link and contact info here} for pricing and information.

If you really feel the need to add the information at appears a little unprofessional. Most people understand that contract is signed. I would change the last few lines to read similar to the following.

Prices are labor and time based and negotiated at time of contract. Please contact {your info} for additional information.

Print services are not provided in house; outsourced print services are available upon request at additional cost.


Why offer free services? I know it is nice and it has it?s place, however this kind of work sells it?s self. One doesn?t have to advertise it to the world, not only will you be swamped. Clients will wonder why you are not offering them some fee services.

Just a few thoughts, Take it with a grain of salt.


jstuartj

Thanks for the kind comments!

and jstuartj, thanks for noticing the stuff about the service page, i corrected the last lines, ill do the rest when i get back from school, you where right, it did sound unprofessional

it might be a while before i start posting, cause my gallery script has its deadline on monday where ill be releasing it.