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Your Text: Insert Slimies » Insert UBB Code » Close Last Tag \| All Tags UBB Help	mobrul - great to see you marking your territory on the net... first of all... some editorial housekeeping: endeaver = endeavour, writted = written, and "what ice water" = "want iced water". ensuring basic grammatacity (or at least purposed derivatives) is the first step for having readable content. And please don't slacken off on this, just because it's on the net. Intelligent readers will not put up with this for long, no matter how enticing your content is. (i know you're working on a 15 minute limit, but at least give your work a thorough read through after your time is up, to correct the basic boo-boos.) ...and believe me, it is enticing. :) An intruiging concept, i look forward to seeing how this unravels. [b]tip #1:[/b] i suggest a link or prompt of some sort, linking to the meaning of your word of the day. Ideally, a little popup when the user mouses over or clicks on the title. the hyperlinks look really tidy. nice work there. your entire site design looks very - insprired? influenced? by stephen's earlier miscminutiae work. is this work yours? i have no doubt you coded it personally, but it seems to influenced by his work to leave room for your own stamp of individuality. please, don't take this as a 'ripper' accusation, i'm saying that you seem to have adopted his style instead of developing your own, that's all. and speaking of stephen, and your list of influential people - i think my list would be almost identical to yours! very cool list of very cool folk. your use of space is quite good. my only whinge is that the 'mission' seems to be in the wrong spot. on the right are your links - links to external places. the mission explains the content of your site. it just doesn't fit. where would i put it? on a new page, personally. linked to from either one of the 'item x' links, or it's own link, above 'encumbrance'. very nice work, mobrul - don't give up on this one, stick to your solemn vow. :) [img]http://www:rosebud@charlie.it.uts.edu.au/~areitsma/images/reitsma_sig.gif[/img] [This message has been edited by reitsma (edited 11-28-2002).] Loading...
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