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Sorry I forgot about this site last night shou. *blush* My bad. Ooh Nice, very nice. Hmm. The logo does need some attention. It's position first and foremost could be better. Top left would add a slightly better flow to the layout overall IMHO. Typography, in terms of character spacing and positioning could also do with some work. The font is fine but the text is boxing in an image with such nice soft edges. Maybe re-working it so the text forms a har line at the top and the whole logo kind of falls off into the background as it runs down the page. Having that anchored to the top left would also work well I think. Paragraph text could to with some tewaking too. The line height it a tad too height, espically if your only using indents to define different paragraphs. Maybe just adding some more white space between them would help. I'd also like to see a little more white space on the right hand margin with a line height that large. I like my margins to at least be 3x the line height, but that's just me. Colour... I must admit, I like the flip side better. Black purple and red wouldn't have been my first choice for a journal site but they kind of work. Still, I think a little tweaking here could go a long way. It's all ballenced at the moment; black background, white text, warm link colour, cool accent colour. Try and unballence it a little. The flip side works well, nice and warm. Suggestions. Add some font controls; ala style would be nice or I can help you with a JS solution if you want. You know mah Q number. Oh and more colour schemes! You've got a simple CSS page with only 1 image, go rank on it! Navagation. Dude, menu at the top/bottom only. Tisk tisk... Maybe you could slot that in on the logo side. Or, if your sold on the menu being fixed to the content area I'd have to push for the top menu, maybe followed up by a smaller size '
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