Topic: Kinetic Conception

Ok, only the front page works currently but the other pages will basically follow the same design. They will have content changes only. So, a design review http://www.geocities.com/_xspyx_/ . I could also use some help making it valid. 21 errors are generated by the stupid Geocities banner, but I have seven that I can't quite figure out how to fix.

-SPyX

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[This message has been edited by SPyX (edited 01-26-2003).]

[This message has been edited by SPyX (edited 01-26-2003).]

Wow. . . nothing?


[This message has been edited by SPyX (edited 01-26-2003).]

i'll say something, but i'm not a critic.


1... thing to think about is: Bulky is bad. Thats my #1 concept when i start out.

2... Blurry is bad in 90% of occasions.

3... the mouse over for your links takes a long time to generate. by the time it gets all the way to full i would have already clicked on it 300 times by then, so if the viewer wasn't retarded its just wasted loading time.

4... Big ugly text is bad

5... i like your colors but the "inset text" thing is kinda corny, but it works i suppose...


overall i'd say i like it but too bulky for much else satisfaction wise, even on 1600x1200 resolution your text appears too large for me. Dont over use <header and <b tags.



"Here we go.. down that same 'ole road again.." - Dredg

Your graphical menu takes way to long to download over dialup

May I suggest optimizing your graphics further....most people aren't going to hang around long enough to wait for them to load



[This message has been edited by Boudga (edited 01-27-2003).]