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Your Text: Insert Slimies » Insert UBB Code » Close Last Tag \| All Tags UBB Help	Ok trying to help here. Maybe i sound a bit harsh but that is not my intention. The yellow bar at the right side is iritating and draws all the attention to it. That would be cool if there was something to do but since it is just decoration it should not draw the attention to it. The menu and the text should have the most attention. I think the menu is better in the second version. I realy like to drop some links for you. First DmS story: [url=http://www.gurusnetwork.com/tutorials/misc/wbtgd/design_1.html]What's behind the great designs?[/url] Also you might take a look at the guru's pages for the [url=http://www.gurusnetwork.com/tutorials/coding.html]coding tutorials[/url] Now let's get on with the review. Personally i don't like backgrounds. You could use a color as background instead, don't be shy and try a darker color as background and some bright one as foreground (text). You are right white is boring... I do like the blue bar at the bottom, it breaks the page a bit. You might consider putting text links in it. I also don't like the fonttype in the blue top bar with the yellow text. The 'brush' makes it a bit childish, use google to search for some free fonts and experiment with them (if you find a nice one you can always look for a paid version). The font should be easy to understand and clean but not 'sterile' At the [url=http://www.larabiefonts.com/]Larabie fonts page[/url] i saw this [url=http://www.larabiefonts.com/fonts/s2.html]Sofachrome font[/url] but this might be overdoing it since it's very fat. Also the [url=http://www.larabiefonts.com/fonts/e.html] Eden Mils font [/url] could be nice. It is one of my favorites very clean but not boring. If there will be fonts in the logo, you maybe could use the same font at the top bar. This will give some consystency to the site. I hope this helps "Freedom of speech is by no means freedom to insult others" from the [url=http://razorart.com]Razorart [/url]goodbye letter. [This message has been edited by Rinswind 2th (edited 02-25-2003).] Loading...
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