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I think the design is lacking. I understand what you say about a 'spartan' or minimalist direction from your client, but there are ways to do both spartan and fulfilling. Maybe you could pull that red (from the logo) and make a 7 or 8 px wide stripe down the left side of the page. Or, maybe you could put a gigantic (35 px or more) brown (same as house) border on the bottom of the page, then repeat a similar, but much smaller brown border on your subsidiary pages. That being said, I wouldn't know good design if it bit me on the ass. You should probably listen to someone else's advice before mine. =) Before I go on to code, though, I will say I like the houses, but the logo text is full of jaggies. Fix that pronto. It seems that is a jpg image. How did you get those kind of jaggies on a jpg image? Ugly. Code: There are easy easy easy ways to accomplish what you are trying to do, with meaningful code (probably a list is what I'd use) and no tables. Then you have good markup. You are presenting no more than a list of links, right? You can stylize that list in most any way you can think of, and still have it be a list. [url=http://www.alistapart.com]ALA[/url] is running an article right now called 'taming lists'. Check it out. I've downloaded your style sheet. It looks like you've got the general idea, and then some. good work, especially for someone moving so quickly. One of the things validators always yell at me about is whereever you describe a background-color, you should also describe a color, and vice versa. I don't know why, Slime or Emps could probably answer that. [url=http://jigsaw.w3.org/css-validator/]w3c css validator[/url] is a handy tool Uh, you forgot your opening body tag. Bad news. The 'align=center' in your divs should probably be moved to your stylesheet. That's all for now. Not bad. Let's see when you have another page built.
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