OZONE Asylum
Forums
Site reviews!
Building It Correctly From the Ground Up (I hope!)
This page's ID:
10318
Search
QuickChanges
Forums
FAQ
Archives
Register
Edit Post
Who can edit a post?
The poster and administrators may edit a post. The poster can only edit it for a short while after the initial post.
Your User Name:
Your Password:
Login Options:
Remember Me On This Computer
Your Text:
Insert Slimies »
Insert UBB Code »
Close
Last Tag
|
All Tags
UBB Help
aargh to much white.. ;) ok here i go first impression: very clean but a bit boring. I am not shure if i will look for more info. the logo is ugly. On a 1024*798 screen it looks a bit crowded in the middle. Maybe a more liquid desing would help. Now some advice, i took the freedom to play with the logo. So i could tell you how to fix it. 1) open logo in PS. 2) copy to layer1 3) working on background layer i selected the text (i used the magic wand to select the surounding white and then inverted it) 4) enlarge the selection 1 pixel 5) guassian blur at 1 pixel (maybe twice) 6) deselect 7) on layer1 put a selection box around the text 8) invert and delete. (leaving only the text) 9) invert again 10) g-blur first with 2pixels then with 1 11) deselect 12) since the blurring made the text a bit pale i put the layer blending mode on color dodge. 13) layer transparancy +/- at 70% That should make your logo nice and clean. I can mail you the psd if you want. Now about the rest. The space in the middle might be bigger on large screens. And on the right column of links it would be nicer if the housing logo was also on the right. So getting the logo on the 'outside' instead off the'leftside'. Maybe the picture should be more liquid too and filing 75% of the screen. As been said an background color would be nice. Just a thought: some testimonials on the side in some sort off greyed-out font type. Just for filling the emptyspace abit but not to draw attention. If you want the psd let me know, icq and mail are in my profile. 2c "Freedom of speech is by no means freedom to insult others" from the [url=http://razorart.com]Razorart [/url]goodbye letter.
Loading...
Options:
Enable Slimies
Enable Linkwords
« Backwards
—
Onwards »