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Your Text: Insert Slimies » Insert UBB Code » Close Last Tag \| All Tags UBB Help	Here are my thoughts: My personal preference is not to have pop up windows (I tend not to revisit sites that have them, because I think they're annoying), but if you feel that this is critical to your business, I'd suggest making it a lot smaller. It fills my screen, which puts me off. On that note, I think your site would flow better if you did everything on a smaller scale (images, tables, etc.). Your title image is so big, it takes up valuable space that could be better used for the vertical menu items. I am using a 1024x768 screen resolution, and I still had to scroll quite a bit to see everything on the first page. Your first page should be less cluttered and more organised to make accessing the different parts of the site easier for the customer. There are so many different table cells with big fonts and exclamation points, it's hard to know what's truly important for me to read. As DL said only a couple of days ago, "there is nothing to draw the eye." For design tips, I suggest that you visit one of my favourite sites: [url=http://www.webpagesthatsuck.com/]Webpages That Suck[/url]. Don't be put off by the title; it's a great source for learning what works, what doesn't and why. Your search engine worked really well for me, as did your forum. I would prefer links on your forum at least back to the home page if not more. That's all I have for now. I am sure that the mad scientist clan will be around to give you more expert advice. :) ~N [img]http://www.worldcrown.com/asylum/nsiggysoup.gif[/img] Loading...
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