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Your Text: Insert Slimies » Insert UBB Code » Close Last Tag \| All Tags UBB Help	index page - holy big graphics batman! That large cloud image is huge and obnoxious. I understand what you are trying to do, but there has to be a better way. Its purpose is not worth the bandwidth it uses and its physical screen size pushed the content too far down. Now, I like what you are doing with the curtains/theater seating type arrangement going on there. The graphics look clean and they serve a purpose. Honestly, I'd do away with the whole cloud thing and simply go with a clean title/heading "Storm Shadow FX" and then the film strip navigation and the theater setting. Typos and bad text -- "filmmaking industry is advancing astronomically" perhaps 'astronomically' isn't the best word here? "cinematic filmmakers overseas of locally based" should be 'or' "'underdog' filmmaker - student, independent" Reword, I know what you are trying to say, but it is awkward. "Considering we offer the highest quality of work around we use the latest technology and software developments..." I'm not sure what this sentence means. Try to rephrase. I'm running 1024x 768 and I'm getting HSBoD. Bad news. About -- Oh, too bad you got rid of the theater. I really like it. Not too bad with the film canisters, but the theater was so much cooler. Clouds are still ugly. Your blue content text is floating up too high, overlapping your filmstrip nav. Centered text, bad bad bad. Bad text/typos "Whether it be sound studios, large green\blue screen studios, editing suites, and many many rooms containing the latest computer technology to build you work on." Awkward. Try rephrasing. Actually, this whole page is awkward. Try rewriting. I'd be happy to help if you'd like. Work -- I still like the theater setting best. Text is centered and too freakin' small, even for my eyes. Writing is better on this page. Animation -- Centered text = bad Text is awkward. I don't like how the text box has been moved from the center (on all the other pages) to the right. Breaks continuity. Compositing -- now justified text? I'm confused. Behind the Scenes -- Keep navigation consistant. I don't like the new navigation in the director's chairs. I dig you using metaphor (filmstrip OR director's chairs) but be consistant throughout the whole site. Conclusion -- Get rid of the stormy clouds at the top (or decrease them significantly in size). Work on your writing. Websites, no matter how cool, still communicate via a language, in this case the English language. I like the theater background the best. I guess that is personal preference, but I'd definately pick one and stick with it. Filmstrip navigation is cool. Director's chair navigation is cool. Pick one and stick with it. Clean up your text. Some of it is justified, some left, some centered, some small, some bigger...pick something and stick with it. Put it in one place, with one size, style, justification. consistancy Loading...
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