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Well if I was being harsh I'd say that part of me wishes your site didn't load... I'm too skint to afford a proper domain name myself, but really that's got nothing to do with giving your site a review. I haven't got much time, so I'll try and keep it concise. Your site has some very good content - both the photography and handful of 3D stuff is very very impressive. But the design of the site is a major letdown in my opinion, it would put me off from hanging around there. Here are a few points you might wanna take note of: + The code, especially for the left frame is terribly bloated. You could well do with losing all the tables, and it would look just as good (if not better) as a list of links (see [url=http://www.alistapart.com/stories/taminglists/]http://www.alistapart.com/stories/taminglists/[/url] ). + The same applies to your home page, the tables are completely unnecessary there. + I'm not really sure what those funny coloured blocks are doing scatteed everywhere - but the funny colours certainly don't coordinate - and they completely make a mess of any structure the look might have. + You have two navigation links to the same place - unnecessary again. + Your links should really be different colours to the normal text, else people will waste time trying to figure out what a link is. + What's the random picture of the girl doing down there? + Does this need to be done with frames? + No DOCTYPE of character encoding info. + Your title logo ain't too pretty, and doesn't fit with the rest of the site. + Courier new makes it look unprofessional. If you look at say, half of those issues then this site would probably be 3 times better design wise. I hope you don't get too offended by this mass of negative criticism, but I honestly couldn't really find much positive to say. Sorry. Hope this helps a little all the same. p.s. my site loads if you visit this URL. It's that stupid dot.tk thingy: [url=http://quis.coolfreepage.com]http://quis.coolfreepage.com[/url] [url=http://www.quisja.tk] [img]http://members.aol.com/chrishillscott/sig.gif[/img] [/url]
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