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Your Text: Insert Slimies » Insert UBB Code » Close Last Tag \| All Tags UBB Help	hey bugs, some nice work. let's go 'stream of consciousness' style on this one. ---------------------------- wow.... i think he may actually be pulling off this colour scheme! impressive. very elegant appearance. draws the eye throught the page in a natural and effective way. the page change is too minimal in my opinion. i would [b]absolutely love[/b] to see the flower and quote change with each page. the portfolio page.... how do i say this.... i really don't like this page. i feel it needs an introduction (preferably saying how this is a small taste of the range of jobs fb can do, or something like that), for starters. the photos just don't cut it, in my opinion. I'm sorry if i'm being harsh, but they seem to lack focus, vibrance, composition. this website has instilled in me complete confidence in the web designer, but these photos are (currently) the only evidence of fb's work - and they aren't really all that compelling. ([i]now, before wella starts crying - the arrangements themselves look beautiful, really, they do - but they aren't well represented in the photos[/i]) moreover, the thumbnails aren't all that enticing, either. none of them really say 'click me' - for instance, the lack of focus in the top one makes me think i will get little more detail from the enlarged picture. i hope this isn't too harsh, dear bugs - but the rest of the website sets a very high standard, which means that anything below this standard goes all sore thumb on me. :) the contact page is absolutely lovely. only comment i have there is that there should be an 'other' option - just to show that FB are flexible enough to cater for a variety of needs - which can be elaborated on in the following text area. ...oh - your form needs some verification. (tip: make it constructive, not constrictive.) i should point out that a phone number could be handy too, and maybe even an email address. the more points of contact, the better. finally, some copy pedantry: [quote]All floral displays are designed collaborating the unique needs of your event, building upon your ideas and will suit your budget. [/quote] the last bit doesn't sound right. something more like "to suit your budget", or "and within your budget" could be better. also, the "Please contact The Flower Buds to discuss your upcoming event. " looks to me like it should be a paragraph below the previous point, not another point. hope this helps. :D [img]http://formclot.net/sig/reitsma_sig.gif[/img] Loading...
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