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V made some good comments up there. I'll just add my impressions briefly: It always warms my heart to see people using proper encoding. Really. So I want to commend you on that, since a lot of "professional" sites forget this little detail (which makes a [b]big[/b] difference for me). You're really all over the place with the colors--there are just way too many of them. Try to develop a color scheme that will identify the site, rather than using a whole bunch of colors with nothing pulling them together. This is somewhat related to what V said above. I noticed something really strange on the photography page. The one sentence you have there is a link, but the cursor doesn't change when you hover over it. Ah, I see, you used an onclick event rather than a link. This is bad. A link is a link my friend, pop up or no. If I had to some up eveything in one word, it would be "consistency." You just don't have it right now. Your site feels like a bunch of disconnected pages thrown together in a box, rather than a consistent whole. Colors will definitely help with consistency, but you need to think about the overall design as well. Sorry if that's a bit vague. [Edit: Oh, I almost forgot. Your markup is extremely bloated. You'd be better off pulling your styles out into an external stylesheet and linking to it on each page.] [img]http://liminality.org/asylum/sigs/[/img] [url=http://www.liminality.org]www.liminality.org[/url]
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