OZONE Asylum
Forums
Site reviews!
print site MK2
This page's ID:
10435
Search
QuickChanges
Forums
FAQ
Archives
Register
Edit Post
Who can edit a post?
The poster and administrators may edit a post. The poster can only edit it for a short while after the initial post.
Your User Name:
Your Password:
Login Options:
Remember Me On This Computer
Your Text:
Insert Slimies »
Insert UBB Code »
Close
Last Tag
|
All Tags
UBB Help
[quote] The flash movie will not play until its all loaded, and will ONLY be on the home page not all pages.[/quote] Actually, it started right away, and it chugged along at a merry 0.5 frames a second whilst it tried to squeeze through my copper phone line. Why are you using flash in first place?... I doesn't add *anything* to the site asside from bloating the overall bandwith. Anyways, it's late and I'm tired so this'll be quick... Other issues of note: * Light blue, pink and white and great for decorating a new-borns room, not so great for trying to sell print services me thinks. * Go to [url=http://www.mozilla.org]www.mozilla.org[/url] - Download the browser, look at your site in that browser, fix. * Go to [url=http://www.opera.com]www.opera.com[/url] - Download the browser, look at your site in that browser, fix. * The bold-first-word thins adds nothing. The white space between the paragraphs is more than enough to communicate a break in the text, using the bold word is over-designing it. * White Space.... Use it. You have a lot of space, not much content yet the menu and title text is horribly cramped. White space can be used constructivly to give the design a nice spacious feel, right now a lot of the white space is being wasted. * I don't have time to look at your CSS code, but something is wrong because even at 1024x786 I have an annoying scrollbar acrosss the bottom of my screen. * I did however have time to look at the the HTML code -- A few errors there. [url=http://validator.w3.org/]http://validator.w3.org/[/url] is your freind for stuff like this. * Navagation -- Consider revising how you structure the site. Do you really need an "About Us?" Section? Kinda tacky if you ask me, would be better placed on the home page. Also, when I've recently been designing navagation structures I try and keep to Meirs (sp?) limit; 3-6 options (or groups of options), any more and it takes a lengthy time for us to process all of the data, any less and were wasting our cognitive abilties. * Overall asthetics could be better IMHO, but for the most part I think the more technical issues should be addressed first. [url=http://dracusis.deviantart.com/] [img]http://www.whatever.net.au/~cameron/files/images/ozone/ArtDecoSiggy.gif[/img] [/url] [This message has been edited by Dracusis (edited 09-01-2003).]
Loading...
Options:
Enable Slimies
Enable Linkwords
« Backwards
—
Onwards »