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[quote]I think I got rid of most of the excess code. Any other stuff I can get rid of?[/quote] Yikes. There is a *ton* of code that code be pulled out. I honestly don't even know where to start. The "links" are a mess. The lack of the usual hand cursor doesn't help, and the javascript pseudo link deal does nothing for your usability. The visual design is very unappealing, and considering that you seem to be trying to sell a product related to visual design...that's not a good thing. The logo at the top of the page is almost unnoticable at first, and then when you do notice it, there's nothing but a couple cheap effects (lens flare, scanlines..... eck...). The rest of the page is completely lacking in any sort of visual design at all. There is no visual structure to help show what is what, nothing interesting to move the eye from one area to another, no boundaries, no headers, no structure or interest at all. The small over-compressed photo of the people standing in a group below the paragraphs serves no purpose whatsoever. It is poor quality, poorly placed, and seemingly completely unrelated to anything else on the page. The navigation is a nightmare. Certain links seem to simply shift the visibility of the content. Certain other links switch to a totally different navigation menu, with no apparent way to get back. The actual content on each "page" is difficult to follow, and seemingly unrelated to the title of the link that was clicked. It is also a grammar teacher's worst nightmare. I am going to guess that English is not your first language. If that is the case, you may very well want to have someone who is a native English speaker translate your copy for you. If that's not that case, that's a totally different story... There is- as Oz pointed out - no encoding or DOCTYPE specified. That can prove very problematic. There are also a great deal of bizarrely complex nesting of <div>'s and <table>'s and <p>'s going on that is rather diificult to decipher, and completely unneccesary (in fact, in some cases, completely incorrect use of HTML that seem sure to cause problems). I honestly can't find much of anything positive to say about this site.
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