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Your Text: Insert Slimies » Insert UBB Code » Close Last Tag \| All Tags UBB Help	Well crap, there goes my gig. :p Not too much to add to what DL said at the moment. I will say, though, that for this sort of site you really want to look as professional as possible. Spell check is a must, and having an English major read the text over is a good idea. As it is, some of your copy is, well, painful... [i]"Whether you need a company logo, banner, advertisement, or signature, InvisionBuilders will come up with the right graphic for you. Our graphic design team is dedicated to pleasing the customer, and that's what they do best."[/i] What does this tell me? Well, that you do logos, banners, ads, and sigs. The rest is meaningless fluff and doublespeak. And I would recommend against mentioning sigs if you're trying to look professional. [i]"ballpark ranges"[/i] The term you're looking for is "ballpark [b]figures[/b]"--"ballpark" itself implies the idea of a general range. But that's not really the point--something like "estimates" would sound far more professional. Just little things like that, really. Your copy goes a really long way in building your image. If your copy is clean and professional, your image will be clean and professional. If not, well, you know. And I've been debating whether or not to say anything about this... [quote]Me and my friends are going to try something new to pick up some cash.[/quote] Honestly, if that's the first thing that comes out of your mouth when you start talking about your new business, be prepared to fail. You may succeed, of course, but it is more likely that you will fail. It takes a very specific mindset to make a business work, and "trying something new to pick up some cash" isn't part of that mindset. I know that sounds terribly harsh, and I feel bad about that, but I also think it needed to be said. You know, I just can't seem to write a pleasant review anymore. Terribly sorry about that. ___________________________ Suho: [url=http://www.liminality.org]www.liminality.org[/url] Loading...
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