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[quote] Me and my friends are going to try something new to pick up some cash. [/quote] Yep, bad thing to openly advertise. Plus it's not even grammatically correct. I also have to pick on DL for a second here: [quote] (also some really bad grammar on that hosting sight...) [/quote] Don't you mean [b]site?[/b] :p You'll want to cut/paste your text into Word or something and spell check it. Just scanning your pages I found a load of spelling errors like "overprised." For the sake of professionalism you should make sure you check the small things like this. I don't like that the hosting page opens in a new window, there's really no reason to do that. I also agree with DL that the header and the buttons are waaaaaaay too big. I mean, I run at 1600x1200 rez and it's absolutely huge on my monitor. I can't imagine what it looks like to someone at a more normal resolution. The picture of the dude in the suit... Well, it's just out there in la-la land. At least use some kind of CSS float to get it inside the block of text. :::[url=http://www.11oh1.net]11oh1[/url]::: [This message has been edited by krets (edited 11-13-2003).]
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