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Your Text: Insert Slimies » Insert UBB Code » Close Last Tag \| All Tags UBB Help	At first glance, it's not that bad. It's actually pretty visually appealing. It does have a few issues which stand out: - The logo looks busy and disorganized. The words are running into each other in a way that doesn't look good. - The text is cramped. It needs more space between its borders (padding), and you need more whitespace overall. - The text lacks any sort of highlight colors, so it looks very bland, and not very inviting. Consider using a different color for headlines, rather than simple bold text. - The menu bar feels incomplete visually. - The black-on-dark-green could be improved. It looks like the green should be lighter or the text should be lighter. - You should consider setting a background color for text inputs, as white is not everyone's default, nor is it necessarily the best color to use for those. Otherwise, the design is alright, IMO. Wouldn't hurt if it were liquid. A look at the code doesn't create the same impression. First of all, the code lacks a Doctype tag, so it's definitely not a standards-compliant design. Second, there's heavy usage of tables where CSS would do the trick fine. So, overall, the visual design is pretty good but could use a little improvement, and the code itself could use a lot of improvement. Loading...
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