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The menu has to many elements. You should always to try keep bellow 6 or 7 menu elements. With less than 7 elements the user has a much easier time to disinguise and regocnize the different elements. The 'bookmark us' link should go, your user know how to bookmark a page and if he wants to bookmark your page he'll do it even if you remove the link. The dotted line just bellow the menu isn't really necessary, you've got one at the bottom to separate things. In the top left corner you got a number floating without any description. Since the number increased when I refreshed the site I'm guessing it is a page counter. If it is a page counter you should remove it, if it is not a page counter you should also remove it since it doesn't serve any purpose except make the user wonder what it is there for. You've also got a 'Today is...' text at the page. I've never seen a reason to add something like that. The user knows what day it is, and if he don't he won't go to your page just to check it out. You should also update your page more often, a 'last updated sept 2003' doesn't make the page seem very active so people aren't likely to return. Bellow your header there is also a 'there are only' text floating around. Any reason why it is there? The page doesn't validate. You should take a look at your code again and fix what errors there are so it valid. A CSS based layout (instead of a table based one) would also have been favourable, but I won't go into that now. But I like the layout and colors. Simple and effective, as it should be. But you might consider adding some warmer colors to the page. All the colors you've used now are kind of cold. Maybe make the headers on the right hand side more orangish instead of the yellow tint they have now. At least I think you should have some warmer colors in there to convey a warmer, happier feeling :) _________________________ "There are 10 kinds of people; those who know binary, those who don't and those who start counting at zero" - [url=http://www.golden-ratio.net]the Golden Ratio[/url] -
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