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I would probably advice against a serif font. They might look nicer, but on screen sans-serif is a lot easier to read. Really impressive that you managed to get pink working on a webpage as such a prominent color. Didn't think it was be possible :) Did you want comments and critiques of the rest of the page as well? Hope so, if not please ignore the following... Do you really need the intro part? Don't see any reason to have it. If you decide to keep it you should at least add a 'skip intro' link. If I enter a page that has a flash intro without a skip intro button, I leave the site imediatly. I'm not there to see some fancy flash work, but I'm there for the content so I should be taken to it as soon as possible. You might also think about adding some more information about the site on the main page. Right now it doesn't contain much information. Only thing there that hints that this is a Joga site is that says 'Jivamukti Joga', and for me who doesn't know anything about Joga that word is meaningless. You don't have to add much, just a couple of words so the user knows he is at the homepage of a Joga instructor. I would also have the pages load in the background, it is a real pain to wait for each page to load. You should aslo remove the fade effect. I press a link to see the content it provides, so I want to get to the content as fast as possible. The hover effect over the sub menus should also be made clearer. At first I thought it was a bug of sort, but then I realised it was intentional. Maybe have blur effect black, instead of the white you're using now. In the contact section you've got her mail adress, but there is no easy way to use it. You should at the very least make the mail a mailto: link, or make the text selectable so that the user easily can paste it into their email program. An even better idea would be to add a conact form alongside the email, that would make it even easier for the user to contact her. _________________________ "There are 10 kinds of people; those who know binary, those who don't and those who start counting at zero" - [url=http://www.golden-ratio.net]the Golden Ratio[/url] - [This message has been edited by Veneficuz (edited 01-25-2004).]
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