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mogge
Bipolar (III) Inmate

From: London
Insane since: Mar 2002

IP logged posted posted 03-06-2004 18:57 Edit Quote

Hello all, could someone please give me some feedback on my site, I've just updated it bigtime.
www.morgande.com

Thanks.


www.morgande.com

Jestah
Maniac (V) Mad Scientist

From: Long Island, NY
Insane since: Jun 2000

IP logged posted posted 03-06-2004 21:51 Edit Quote

The Good:
Its pretty easy to navigate around. With links titled Contact and PHP & MySQL there are no real surprises where you're going to be taken when you click something. I hate when designers try to be too creative with how they name the pages in their site.

The Bad:
You've done a terrible job in communicating what this website is for. Your index page is a picture of one of your products without a description but rather a short list of generic features. Rather then displaying one product without any real description, your index page should tell visitors exactly what it is you are doing. You won't make a dime if visitors show up and scratch their heads.

Another example is your Webpage Design page. Are you a webdesigner? You have three websites on this page but no real information on what you do and how you do it. Do you specialize in graphics, back end, or both? Do you charge per hour or a flat fee for the website? Things like this should be discussed.

My third and final example is your Join page. What the fuck am I joining?

The Ugly:
Your content should definitely be re-written but another large problem with the site is the layout. The site is boring. I would suggest looking to re-design it to make better use of the full browser window, adding bolder colors, and making it more interactive.

Thats just my $.02 though.

Jestah

[This message has been edited by Jestah (edited 03-06-2004).]

mogge
Bipolar (III) Inmate

From: London
Insane since: Mar 2002

IP logged posted posted 03-06-2004 22:45 Edit Quote

haha! good points, I just realised, what the fuck are you joining ? nothing really just to buy .. hmm, crap .. need to rethink a bit, thanks, great comment, need more of them ..

www.morgande.com



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