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I'd just like to add a few things to what has been said above... mostly impressions, really, and a few nitpicks. My two biggest problems with this design would have to be color and space. Color-wise it is at best uninspired, and at worst confusing (as Cameron pointed out). It is overwhelmingly gray, with only that dark red to break things up, and I just don't think it works. Space-wise, I'm getting the sense that you perceive this page as a conglomeration of elements rather than as a whole space. It seems rather disjointed--the various elements are not working together. Does that make sense? I know what the page makes me [i]feel[/i] when I look at it, but I'm not sure if I'm putting it into words properly. On the concrete level, yes, a lot of it had to do with margins and padding. Nitpick #1: What is the purpose of the capital letters in parentheses in the menu headings? My first thought upon seeing them was that they indicated access key assignments, but then I realized that not only would that not make sense, but you also have two "S"s, which would screw things up. I don't really see the point in doing this, and I don't think it's worth the possible confusion. Nitpick #2: The "view intro" link on the left side just reloads the page. Nitpick #3: Why italics on hover? Most text on the web looks pretty bad in italics... I would think a color change and the underline would be enough. That's about it for now. Hope that helps. :) ___________________________ Suho: [url=http://www.liminality.org]www.liminality.org[/url]
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