Preserved Topic: Flaws

I wanted to know...Are there major flaws noticeable in this image ? This is not a sig, just a personal creation for training.




Confine yourself to observing and you always miss the point of your own life. The object can be stated this way : Live the best life you can. Life is a game whose rules you learn if you leap into it and play it to the hilt. Otherwise, you are caught off balance, continually surprised by the shifting play. Non-players often whine and complain that luck always passes them by. They refuse to see that they can create some of their own luck.
--Darwi Odrade

Moon Shadow: As it is not a sig I'm moving it to the PS forum.

And my thoughts? It is awfully difficult to read - if I hadn't read the books (and seen the film) I would have struggled to guess what the text said.

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