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I'm not a good guy to give opinions because I'm just an amateur that likes taking pictures. So, you may well disregard my comment. The one thing I noted and that I disliked in your pictures is your tendency to cut a small part of the main subjects. For instance: in the first picture, the sign is slightly cut (differently from Shizzam, I like the addition of the sign), 2nd one the horse shoe is slightly cut, secret vices, the knife is slightly cut, and family nostalgia, the tractor is slightly cut. Not that you can't cut things, but since those things were supposed to be of importance in the composition, cutting them that little much makes me feel that you have composed them wrongly. The problem, for me, is that they are all "slightly" cut. They should be in their entirety or cut in some deeper degree, I mean, cut more. It's like taking a picture, a portrait of someone, and slightly cutting the top of the head of the person. If all these slight cutting are due to a cut to post the picture here, then please, disregard my comment for sure.
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